Edits

Here is a very bad picture of my edits.

Mind Scrambling

Edits Brickley Jules

Blue is additions and red is deletions. Black is where I started.  Not much remains of where I started. I don’t know if that is good or bad. Good I hope. Chapter One and Chapter Two have been scrubbed clean of -to be and -ly. Well as much as my mind can currently stand. Lol!

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